Very nice, but its too easy to get into the top 50 Try making some things that get in your way. Mountains in the desert, mounds of snow in the arctic, tropical trees in the beach, streetlamps in the city, trees in the feild, etc, aliens that take you from space and abduct you, etc. Maybe some collectable things like an astronauts helmet in space, surfboard at the beac, to travel farther, maybe ballons to raise you up.
Its interesting, but it could have used more detail. Why were there aliens? What do they have to do with life and death? Who is our main character, etc. It Would make the story flow a bit smoother. Try to speed up what is of the description (Mabe change it to a narrorative vocal. Nice work on The Suspence. The art was good but a bit plain. The footsteps were confusing, Which way did they go? Do the Aliens Levitate and stay the same shape? Walking (or whatever mode of transportation) cycles would have been nice. Maybe more Detail on the house, unless it's supposed to be "covered in blood"
It has Potential though. It's a good start. I really hope you do continue, and put spme more effort into it. Look at the top rated vids of all time and use that quality. Look at all the tutorials. Expirament and practice, that is if you want a legendary Film.
Ill Protect it, because I want to see more. However, ill give 6/10 because I am being honest. Like I said, its a start, but it could use a bit of work to be big.
I shall implement some into part 2, although i would like to keepthe drawing style as i don't likt to copy other peoples animation styles. I'm gonna use this as like my own thing, but everything else I will take into consideration XD
doupen
Elohim Shaitan
All 29 flash Reviews
Rated 4 / 5 stars June 16, 2008
Very nice.
seems like you put alot of work on it. It reminds me of simgirls.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 10, 2008
hmm..pretty good.
for something made by a beginner-ish person. But why does the play button say replay when it's not hovered?
Lol I noticed that myself! I fixed that so i'll upload it again.
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 6, 2008
What?
I don't get it. Otherwise it'd still suck. Better art would help.
Thank you for reviewing.
Rated 3 / 5 stars April 5, 2008
Weird
It's definately different. It's trippy. Im a bit dizzy watching it. I cant think so Ill give it a 3
K. But seriously. Its a experiment
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 29, 2008
Nice, but a few suggestions
Very nice, but its too easy to get into the top 50 Try making some things that get in your way. Mountains in the desert, mounds of snow in the arctic, tropical trees in the beach, streetlamps in the city, trees in the feild, etc, aliens that take you from space and abduct you, etc. Maybe some collectable things like an astronauts helmet in space, surfboard at the beac, to travel farther, maybe ballons to raise you up.
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 28, 2008
walmart lmao
Lmao, so does he slash prices with his sword?
Seriously. Looks like walmart guy
Hilarious.
Rated 2 / 5 stars March 22, 2008
its good but
its not even flash XD
thats why they call it a "flash portal"
Obviously you didn't read the description. There is not only just flash on newgrounds, there is also stop animation..
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 15, 2008
it was weird
nice art although it was just gross.
Vomit is delicious. Especially when binge drinking.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 15, 2008
Its pretty cool
but it'd be more interesting with a purpose, and things to avoid, and with enimies, an amount of life and some balls that give life.
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 17, 2008
Pretty Good. But...
Its interesting, but it could have used more detail. Why were there aliens? What do they have to do with life and death? Who is our main character, etc. It Would make the story flow a bit smoother. Try to speed up what is of the description (Mabe change it to a narrorative vocal. Nice work on The Suspence. The art was good but a bit plain. The footsteps were confusing, Which way did they go? Do the Aliens Levitate and stay the same shape? Walking (or whatever mode of transportation) cycles would have been nice. Maybe more Detail on the house, unless it's supposed to be "covered in blood"
It has Potential though. It's a good start. I really hope you do continue, and put spme more effort into it. Look at the top rated vids of all time and use that quality. Look at all the tutorials. Expirament and practice, that is if you want a legendary Film.
Ill Protect it, because I want to see more. However, ill give 6/10 because I am being honest. Like I said, its a start, but it could use a bit of work to be big.
All noted doupen! Thanks.
I shall implement some into part 2, although i would like to keepthe drawing style as i don't likt to copy other peoples animation styles. I'm gonna use this as like my own thing, but everything else I will take into consideration XD
*STALES*